OMGILUKIA -glump- Awesome page :3 The first panel is awesome <3 Terra's foot looks a little clump on the first panel XP

Once again an awesome page <333

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Poor Danjien. D8 Poor Talc... he's getting eaten.

The colors look fine to me. But, then again, what do I know? I draw trees like triangles with rectangles underneath. But, that's not the point. This page looks great as usual.

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Yeah, I think Talc's family gets the short end of the stick here.. Thanks for your input.

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No problem. x3

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Run you Fool!

Haha lovely page, Kiarei! The lighting from the clouds are really nicely done, the way you gradually moved them in page-by-page! the rain is also nicely done, lovely paint-ish effect! The character poses are gorgeously done! Goodness all those markings - I don't know how you keep up with them! :3 I see that your shading has softened on some parts, nice effect!

The only crits I could give is... on the next page maybe, just do some little trails of rain down the faces/bodies :3 Lovely work altogether!

-holds up hand- Teacher! I have a question!!
You know the huts in the background on the first panel? Do the humans live there or is it in a far off place?
And where did the little rugrat go!?

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everything by u x.X
That awesome for just one person. i'll read it when u'r finished ^^

awesome

fantastic!
i just read the, all in order, and so far, its reall good ^^
do you do it on photoshop?

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Wow, the expressions and poses are all so perfect! I can only imagine all the effort put into this. Great work!

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Haha, totally. Danjien is intelligent.. somewhere. Deep down. I just know it. D:

Yeah, I think I like the softer-edged shading as well, especially on the legs and other roundish areas. Glad you noticed! ^^

I'll definitely have rain on their bodies in the following pages, but in this case I figured since the rain had just begun, it wouldn't be running down 'em yet. ^^

The huts are part of the encampment that the humans are temporarily staying at; it's an "outpost" of sorts on the journey to the city they're heading to. It's nearby, but they're smallish tents as well. As the scenes of pages 4-7 are going on, Ken has run back to the camp and initiated the evacuation as ordered by Talc in 4.. which we don't see because of the focus on the events with Terra and Talc, but yeah. ^^

Thanks as always for your thoughtful comment!

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